Poems from the Heart

January 10, 2010

Poem – Look Deeper

Filed under: Poems about Life — by ladyelenauk @ 8:45 pm
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I think sometimes in life, we are too quick to point a finger…..


Poem – Look Deeper

 Why does he always smoke and continue to take Coke?

Needles on his skin – Everyday another poke.

Could something have pushed him to it?

What on earth made his heart Quit?

  *   *   *

Why is she “legless” always having a drink?

Why do you think she needs a shrink?

Could something be hurting her deep inside?

What in her, a long time died?

 *   *   *

Why does she want to look as thin as a pin?

Oblivious to the bones sticking out through her skin.

Could it be the one thing, she feels she can control?

Her family will be  shattered, if it takes her soul?

*   *   *  

Don’t point fingers at these  people

Or use them as a point of ridicule.

Look Deeper. Something could have happened inside

Look to help, before it ends in Suicide.

*   *   *

Ps. I apologise for the explicit picture – just bringing the message home.

LadyElena  Jan 2010 © All rights reserved


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  1. You made some good points there. I did a search on the topic and found most people will agree with your blog.

    Comment by Viagra — February 21, 2010 @ 10:42 am |Reply

    • Thanks for your comments Viagra. Sorry for late response – WordPress put your comments in Spam folder.
      Best Wishes

      Comment by ladyelenauk — February 26, 2010 @ 6:46 pm |Reply

  2. I also like to make poems and read lots of books that is related to Poetry..-.

    Comment by Toby Simpson — June 10, 2010 @ 5:23 pm |Reply

    • That’s lovely. Let me know where you write so I can visit your blog. Best Wishes.

      Comment by ladyelenauk — June 12, 2010 @ 10:00 pm |Reply

  3. Hello.
    And Bye.

    Comment by Diatioditle — June 25, 2010 @ 8:06 pm |Reply

  4. Yo Yo Yo! wazzap!


    And Bye.

    Comment by SpobremumpDum — July 2, 2010 @ 10:04 pm |Reply

  5. i love poetry because it is a way of expressing my own feelings.,-‘

    Comment by Louie Holmes — July 27, 2010 @ 4:08 pm |Reply

  6. poetry is the thing i like, i create poems during my spare time'”:

    Comment by Hunter Reed — September 14, 2010 @ 3:44 am |Reply

    • Thanks Hunter. Its nice to know you like Poetry too. 🙂

      Comment by ladyelenauk — September 16, 2010 @ 11:01 pm |Reply

  7. it is easy to make great poems if you are very very inspired**’

    Comment by Post Nasal Drip Treatment : — October 24, 2010 @ 10:20 pm |Reply

  8. Maybe you should change the post title Poem – Look Deeper Poems from the Heart to more specific for your content you create. I liked the blog post withal.

    Comment by Pointer Men's Basketball — October 30, 2010 @ 1:36 am |Reply

    • Thanks. That’s a good idea – It’s a long title but I will consider it.
      I appreciate you stopping by.

      Comment by ladyelenauk — November 3, 2010 @ 8:43 pm |Reply

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